February 15, 2018:
This was a tricky page to make. It jumps from one emotion to the next pretty quick, while also simultaneously dealing with a lot of physical character movement. Fingers crossed it comes across well!
Ive been reading a lot about fight scenes and how they’re structured like mini-stories. Similar to a story, when your protagonist thinks they’ve finally figured everything out, only to be pushed back in their journey, a fight must also give hope and then crushingly take it away. Haha writers are just pure evil.